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Jan 26, 2011 08:11 |  #1

These were taken back in September at my one year old's birthday party. Let me know what you think.

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Jan 26, 2011 08:17 |  #2

The 1st one is adorable... would have loved to see his eyes too tho. The second one is blown out on the left side of her face, so detail is lost. The third one is very cute, but the can of coke, cardboard box, etc. pull the eye away from the people.


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Jan 26, 2011 08:24 |  #3

philodelphi wrote in post #11717070 (external link)
The 1st one is adorable... would have loved to see his eyes too tho. The second one is blown out on the left side of her face, so detail is lost. The third one is very cute, but the can of coke, cardboard box, etc. pull the eye away from the people.

Thanks. Yeah, I agree. I wish I had taken off my glasses for that one :) The second one, i'll see if i can fix the blown effect on the side. Does this one look better for number 3?

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Jan 26, 2011 08:29 |  #4

Yes much better. I'd even clone out the hula hoop. On my screen here at work, the color looks a little odd on the man's face... too red. I'm not great at photoshopping, but I'd try lowering the brightness of the entire picture, and/or see what b&w conversion looks like. To me the color really distracts what the photo is about which is the rapport between the 2.


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Jan 26, 2011 08:30 |  #5

philodelphi wrote in post #11717140 (external link)
Yes much better. I'd even clone out the hula hoop. On my screen here at work, the color looks a little odd on the man's face... too red. I'm not great at photoshopping, but I'd try lowering the brightness of the entire picture, and/or see what b&w conversion looks like. To me the color really distracts what the photo is about which is the rapport between the 2.

Agreed on the redness. I'll see what I can do. My monitor here isn't the best either, but maybe i can make a few changes. Give me a few mins. :)


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Jan 26, 2011 08:39 |  #6

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Maybe these will be a little better :) Wish i had my macbook here with me, i could definitely change it around better.

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