
Self-Portrait-2
I like the feel of this one. The vignetting adds to that. I think it looks a little green though. May just be your choice of pp. 8.5/10
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b-rice Senior Member 253 posts Likes: 13 Joined Oct 2010 Location: Athens, Ohio More info | May 12, 2012 08:53 | #4681 Bond_Savingsbond wrote in post #14420190 ![]() Self-Portrait-2 I like the feel of this one. The vignetting adds to that. I think it looks a little green though. May just be your choice of pp. 8.5/10
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samsen Cream of the Crop 7,468 posts Likes: 239 Joined Apr 2006 Location: LA More info | May 12, 2012 10:02 | #4682 Bond_Savingsbond wrote in post #14420190 My eyes are drawn to the red fringe/shadow on her neck which makes my eyes wander a bit. Her hair on the left side of the picture makes me wonder if that hair is part of the background or actually hers. 5/10 Thanks Bond_Savingsbond. Weak retaliates,
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stoplight Junior Member 25 posts Joined Jun 2011 More info | ooops....to be honest not exactly sure what you were going for, lighting, texture etc. I find myself just staring at the brown stuff wondering what it is. 5/10 Image hosted by forum (595582) © stoplight [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff.
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samsen Cream of the Crop 7,468 posts Likes: 239 Joined Apr 2006 Location: LA More info | May 12, 2012 12:10 | #4684 /\ To be in compliance with the theme of forum, Please rate the picture above you and someone with rate yours too. Weak retaliates,
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RishabhSood Senior Member 447 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 More info | May 12, 2012 17:02 | #4685 stoplight wrote in post #14420768 ooops....to be honest not exactly sure what you were going for, lighting, texture etc. I find myself just staring at the brown stuff wondering what it is. 5/10 Tightly cropped but was going for a certain look and feel. Interested in the good and bad..thanks Hosted photo: posted by stoplight in ./showthread.php?p=14420768&i=i245994558 forum: Critique Corner 5/10 Not sharp at all, I'd have loved to see the ball somewhere in the frame, Should have used faster shutter speed too.
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May 13, 2012 02:42 | #4686 Looks like you were forced to shoot as wide as you could for this photo. I say that because the guys face is out of focus, but it looks like a nice moment. My eyes should be drawn to the lovely lady but it's not. Don't be afraid to push the ISO to your camera's limit. 6.5/10 Image hosted by forum (595688) © Bond_Savingsbond [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. 500px
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samsen Cream of the Crop 7,468 posts Likes: 239 Joined Apr 2006 Location: LA More info | May 13, 2012 11:37 | #4687 Bond_Savingsbond wrote in post #14423737 Looks like you were forced to shoot as wide as you could for this photo. I say that because the guys face is out of focus, but it looks like a nice moment. My eyes should be drawn to the lovely lady but it's not. Don't be afraid to push the ISO to your camera's limit. 6.5/10 I need harsh criticism for this picture please.
IMG NOTICE: [NOT AN IMAGE URL, NOT RENDERED INLINE] 4/10 And I have been mean apart from Harsh. Nice try and fun image but some major flaws: - Look at the shadow of building in back ground (Angulated ie. early / late hours of AM/PM) then look at made up shadow of girl; Right under here ie. mid noon shadow. So post processing calls for not being real. - Similarly if she was to shoot in that environment with given sun's angle, you would expect more direct sun over her face and body and not the type of through transmission of light from her hair and her bodies underside shadow. They don't go together. - Theme of image and surrounding does not make a harmonious coexistence. - Everything is unusual but this can't explain why the horizon should be tilted 2 degree CCW. - When you are good with pp, why not to reproduce her foot too so to give a total sense of flow in air. - Shift of color calls for a very special mood such as fashion image but definitely not goes with a fun image unless this is in a context of several other images that because I don't see them, miss something. Weak retaliates,
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BendTheLight Cream of the Crop 6,098 posts Likes: 29 Joined Feb 2010 Location: Barnsley, UK More info | May 13, 2012 11:55 | #4688 Samsen, you need to post your image for crit!
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May 13, 2012 19:52 | #4689 samsen wrote in post #14424944 4/10 And I have been mean apart from Harsh. Nice try and fun image but some major flaws: - Look at the shadow of building in back ground (Angulated ie. early / late hours of AM/PM) then look at made up shadow of girl; Right under here ie. mid noon shadow. So post processing calls for not being real. - Similarly if she was to shoot in that environment with given sun's angle, you would expect more direct sun over her face and body and not the type of through transmission of light from her hair and her bodies underside shadow. They don't go together. - Theme of image and surrounding does not make a harmonious coexistence. - Everything is unusual but this can't explain why the horizon should be tilted 2 degree CCW. - When you are good with pp, why not to reproduce her foot too so to give a total sense of flow in air. - Shift of color calls for a very special mood such as fashion image but definitely not goes with a fun image unless this is in a context of several other images that because I don't see them, miss something. It's all good, I've been waiting all day for someone to tell me what's wrong with this picture. 500px
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May 13, 2012 20:24 | #4690 IMAGE LINK: http://www.flickr.com/photos/kaptnkain/7156668844/ You and I Not 100% happy with the PP, but meh. - Ilya
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RishabhSood Senior Member 447 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 More info | May 14, 2012 02:54 | #4691 kaptnkain wrote in post #14426842 ![]() You and I Not 100% happy with the PP, but meh. 7/10 I like the lighting but I think the processing thought be better, and a little tighter crop. New Delhi Wedding Photographer
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J.Wolfe Senior Member 647 posts Likes: 3 Joined Oct 2011 Location: Philadelphia More info | May 14, 2012 11:33 | #4692 atmosphere and the sharpness/clarity are probably your strongest points in this shot. The beam of light is distracting, the shadows that are on his face are distracting, and the angle you shot is not all that pleasant, expecting to see a large crowd but instead seeing an odd bar setup and people very far away. 6/10 No Looking Back Hi, I'm Justin
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jerefish Goldmember 1,003 posts Likes: 3 Joined Feb 2011 Location: Canton, MI More info | May 14, 2012 12:09 | #4693 I really enjoy the colors, the correct exposure and the leading lines. You did well with this image. The only thing I would like to see different would be to see the top of the building at the end there, but that may make it a whole different picture. Nice work 9/10. Jeremy or jfish works
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BendTheLight Cream of the Crop 6,098 posts Likes: 29 Joined Feb 2010 Location: Barnsley, UK More info | May 14, 2012 12:26 | #4694 Lovely shot of Julianne...only thing bothering me is the overly yellow colour...But this makes a fabulour hi key mono shot...7/10 13-5-2012 Starling Bath
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Lakhum Senior Member 253 posts Likes: 1 Joined May 2011 More info | May 14, 2012 14:44 | #4695 Like the mood and feel of the image. technically i would like more colours on the birds. 6/10 Cadillac EXT Ex-ride Body; Canon 550d
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