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Jul 28, 2012 02:53 |  #5266

Composition is quite boring, the eyes and beak are completely centred. Nice seperation of the background. I would prefer to see more of the bird. The expression on it's face is priceless haha. 6/10

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Jul 28, 2012 02:56 |  #5267

i really like the placement of the flash but i dont like it in the picture. it would be cool to see a more under view. 8/10

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Jul 28, 2012 03:23 as a reply to  @ Fricks's post |  #5268

Nice moody landscape, I think I would'v liked it a bit more if it was tighter cropped maybe in a Pano so you could see the breaking waves better, the ballance just doesn't feel right, it feels like its tilting to the right also, I do like the colours. 7/10

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Jul 28, 2012 06:14 |  #5269

Sorry, I just don't like the crop, slight tilt, selective colour not doing the capture any favours either. Looks like a snapshot, could have been more creative with DOF.... 5/10

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Jul 28, 2012 06:52 |  #5270

Not much for the post processing around the edges... and the shoulder distracts to much... 5/10

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Jul 28, 2012 09:24 |  #5271

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Not much for the post processing around the edges... and the shoulder distracts to much... 5/10

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Jul 28, 2012 21:13 |  #5272

A good sharp capture, and a solid bw conversion. I would prefer a little more headroom, his finger is pointing to the edge of the frame. 8.5-10

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Jul 28, 2012 23:13 |  #5273

This is a tough photo to judge. While I like how you have captured the rings on the hills, the lighting is not very good, which is unfortunate because there's nothing you can do about that in nature photography. Therefore, 8/10.

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Jul 29, 2012 02:47 |  #5274

Edit: Welcome to POTN sunush

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At Mana Village-- two local girls at the last village in India before the Indo Tibet border. I did not ask the girls to pose, it was just natural when I took my camera out to picture them.
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Nice capture, but this is a bit of a personal preference when it comes to wide angled shots. The lower the angle the better.

A very cute and innocent expression on the girls face but it's a little soft.

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Jul 29, 2012 15:54 |  #5275

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9.5/10 awesome capture.

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Jul 29, 2012 16:15 |  #5276

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9.5/10 awesome capture.

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Jul 29, 2012 18:14 |  #5277

Nice setup. Baby looks slightly annoyed though. Waiting for a better expression would have pushed this all the way to the top. 8/10

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Jul 29, 2012 18:54 |  #5278

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Nice setup. Baby looks slightly annoyed though. Waiting for a better expression would have pushed this all the way to the top. 8/10

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Really cool idea for the composition 9/10. Just wonder if maybe it would be better to crop out a bit of top/bottom edges to keep eyes on the rings, and not wander onto the big flowers behind them.


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Jul 30, 2012 01:50 |  #5279

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Really cool idea for the composition 9/10. Just wonder if maybe it would be better to crop out a bit of top/bottom edges to keep eyes on the rings, and not wander onto the big flowers behind them.


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6/10 very dull for me, I think you can make it a lot better in PP.

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Jul 30, 2012 12:13 |  #5280

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6/10 very dull for me, I think you can make it a lot better in PP.

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Is this Kal Penn, or a freakishly close doppelganger?! Anyway nice sharp capture, nice DOF. It looks like he's leading a rally or something, personally I would have liked to see more of the environment. 7/10

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