Good potential but not keen on the processing, and the halos around the castle and trees totally kill it for me.
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jack880 Goldmember More info | Dec 07, 2012 18:13 | #6106 Good potential but not keen on the processing, and the halos around the castle and trees totally kill it for me. Cocktail Sticks https://www.flickr.com/photos/jackhenriques/
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BrainMechanic Goldmember 3,526 posts Likes: 19 Joined Apr 2010 More info | Dec 07, 2012 20:36 | #6107 Permanent banjack880 wrote in post #15339497 Good potential but not keen on the processing, and the halos around the castle and trees totally kill it for me. 5/10 ![]() Cocktail Sticks
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Christina.DazzleByDesign Goldmember 1,973 posts Likes: 6 Joined Mar 2012 More info | Dec 08, 2012 09:08 | #6108 Brain Mechanic wrote in post #15339887 Kind of a candid one from my recent vacation, nothing special but I liked it and thought to share. ![]() I Like the expression and the lightness of the subject's eyes, it really catches my attention. But there is something off about the background, on my screen it looks splotchy and not "smooth" out of focus blur. I find it enough to be distracting. I would also like to see a crop with a little less of the top and off the right. 8/10 Image hosted by forum (627259) © Christina.DazzleByDesign [SHARE LINK] THIS IS A LOW QUALITY PREVIEW. Please log in to see the good quality stuff. 5D3 | 7D | 85L II | 70-300L | 24-105L | Nifty Fifty | 600EX-RT_______________
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BrainMechanic Goldmember 3,526 posts Likes: 19 Joined Apr 2010 More info | Dec 08, 2012 09:47 | #6109 Permanent banChristina.DazzleByDesign wrote in post #15341251 I Like the expression and the lightness of the subject's eyes, it really catches my attention. But there is something off about the background, on my screen it looks splotchy and not "smooth" out of focus blur. I find it enough to be distracting. I would also like to see a crop with a little less of the top and off the right. 8/10 A pair of young white lions - would have shared through flickr but it isn't working at the moment, so I had to resize a bit to attach :/ Hosted photo: posted by Christina.DazzleByDesign in ./showthread.php?p=15341251&i=i70768284 forum: Critique Corner
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Mazaki Junior Member 26 posts Joined Dec 2012 More info | Dec 08, 2012 20:15 | #6110 Composition is very nice, the DOF is pleasing, and the subjects are beautiful too. Only thing I would change would be a little more drama on their coats. I'll give you 9/10. 5D MK III | 50 1.2L | 100 2.8L | 16-35 2.8L II | 24-70 2.8L | 70-200 2.8L IS II
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jack880 Goldmember More info | Dec 09, 2012 04:27 | #6111 Very nice - good light, depth of field and processing. Only slight issue is a bit too much empty space on the left I think self portrait 3 https://www.flickr.com/photos/jackhenriques/
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Christina.DazzleByDesign Goldmember 1,973 posts Likes: 6 Joined Mar 2012 More info | Dec 09, 2012 07:32 | #6112 jack880 wrote in post #15344096 Very nice - good light, depth of field and processing. Only slight issue is a bit too much empty space on the left I think 8/10 ![]() self portrait 3 Terrifying, haha. I like it, its grungy and gives off that horror/haloween feel. But the eyes are too distracting - are those digital eyes? Like the kind that move around because of a projection behind them? They just look too out of focus compared to the rest of the image. Is it a real person? Because it looks so real, but can't possibly be, know what I mean? Spirit & Raven 5D3 | 7D | 85L II | 70-300L | 24-105L | Nifty Fifty | 600EX-RT_______________
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jack880 Goldmember More info | Dec 09, 2012 08:40 | #6113 Christina.DazzleByDesign wrote in post #15344367 Terrifying, haha. I like it, its grungy and gives off that horror/haloween feel. But the eyes are too distracting - are those digital eyes? Like the kind that move around because of a projection behind them? They just look too out of focus compared to the rest of the image. Is it a real person? Because it looks so real, but can't possibly be, know what I mean? great makeup if so. 8/10Thanks, I'm flattered you're not sure it's real! It's me (all effects done in photoshop) - here's the original. Zombie (me) original https://www.flickr.com/photos/jackhenriques/
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I love the running horse photo. I would give it an 8.5 to 9. I would just like to see a little more in front of the horse (giving him room to run).
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jeders Senior Member 421 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jun 2012 Location: GUAM, Usa More info | Dec 09, 2012 09:25 | #6115 Houston1852 wrote in post #15344634 Here's one I took of my neighbors last weekend. It was cold and snowy, but a good day for a walk : ) ![]() very nice! it makes you feel the "love" in it. also how cold it was, his hand hidden away in his sleeve. although, i feel that you could crop the lower half of the shot. 9/10 Set Take 2 T3i Gripped | Canon 85mm f/1.8 | Tokina 11-16mm f/2.8 | Sigma 17-50 f/2.8 | 580EX II
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PhilF Cream of the Crop 5,737 posts Likes: 609 Joined Jan 2010 Location: Valencia, CA More info | Dec 09, 2012 10:27 | #6116 just an opinion to people posting HDR..... in PP, watch out for halos...especially edge of trees and buildings. http://philfernandezphotography.com
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Dec 09, 2012 10:40 | #6117 jeders wrote in post #15344664 very nice! it makes you feel the "love" in it. also how cold it was, his hand hidden away in his sleeve. although, i feel that you could crop the lower half of the shot. 9/10 ![]() Set Take 2 I like the composition on the food and how you've laid out the plates, along with the angle you shot. The steak is juicy and looks really tasty, +1 for steak. I do think the white balance seems off with a strong reddish hue throughout the photo. I also think the Fiji water bottle kind of stands out and doesn't fit with the other items. Finally a word of caution, I would have liked to see maybe a Killian's Red or a Stella Artois there, but that doesn't detract from the photo. Sunrise of Fire (EOS 6D) Dmitriy Khaykin
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Mike2012 Member 39 posts Joined Nov 2012 Location: NYC More info | I'm pretty new to this whole thing, but I must say this is a really nice shot. 9/10 really like the color of the sky and the tree's silhouette is striking. The only thing I will say is the land itself is a little bland. This was probably intentional though, to set off that great sky! Also, maybe crop out a little bit of the bottom?
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clifference Mostly Lurking 16 posts Joined Nov 2012 More info | Dec 09, 2012 11:38 | #6119 Mike2012 wrote in post #15344985 I'm pretty new to this whole thing, but I must say this is a really nice shot. 9/10 really like the color of the sky and the tree's silhouette is striking. The only thing I will say is the land itself is a little bland. This was probably intentional though, to set off that great sky! Also, maybe crop out a little bit of the bottom? Here is something I've worked on recently.
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jeders Senior Member 421 posts Likes: 2 Joined Jun 2012 Location: GUAM, Usa More info | Dec 09, 2012 19:12 | #6120 ddk632 wrote in post #15344898 I like the composition on the food and how you've laid out the plates, along with the angle you shot. The steak is juicy and looks really tasty, +1 for steak. I do think the white balance seems off with a strong reddish hue throughout the photo. I also think the Fiji water bottle kind of stands out and doesn't fit with the other items. Finally a word of caution, I would have liked to see maybe a Killian's Red or a Stella Artois there, but that doesn't detract from the photo. 6.5/10thanks! these items were used for a set menu promo, so i had no choice lol T3i Gripped | Canon 85mm f/1.8 | Tokina 11-16mm f/2.8 | Sigma 17-50 f/2.8 | 580EX II
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