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Dec 07, 2012 18:13 |  #6106

Good potential but not keen on the processing, and the halos around the castle and trees totally kill it for me.

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Dec 07, 2012 20:36 |  #6107
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jack880 wrote in post #15339497 (external link)
Good potential but not keen on the processing, and the halos around the castle and trees totally kill it for me.

5/10

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Likes the composition and the exposure. Its an interesting pic. 8/10.

Kind of a candid one from my recent vacation, nothing special but I liked it and thought to share.

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Dec 08, 2012 09:08 |  #6108

Brain Mechanic wrote in post #15339887 (external link)
Kind of a candid one from my recent vacation, nothing special but I liked it and thought to share.

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I Like the expression and the lightness of the subject's eyes, it really catches my attention. But there is something off about the background, on my screen it looks splotchy and not "smooth" out of focus blur. I find it enough to be distracting. I would also like to see a crop with a little less of the top and off the right. 8/10

A pair of young white lions - would have shared through flickr but it isn't working at the moment, so I had to resize a bit to attach :/

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Christina.DazzleByDesi​gn wrote in post #15341251 (external link)
I Like the expression and the lightness of the subject's eyes, it really catches my attention. But there is something off about the background, on my screen it looks splotchy and not "smooth" out of focus blur. I find it enough to be distracting. I would also like to see a crop with a little less of the top and off the right. 8/10

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Beautiful image!! I know rules say I'm supposed to not criticize whoever did it for me but a bit of rule bending never hurt anyone! LOL! 10/10!

I agree with your opinions about my pic completely. Here is reworked version:

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Dec 08, 2012 20:15 |  #6110

Composition is very nice, the DOF is pleasing, and the subjects are beautiful too. Only thing I would change would be a little more drama on their coats. I'll give you 9/10.

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Dec 09, 2012 04:27 |  #6111

Very nice - good light, depth of field and processing. Only slight issue is a bit too much empty space on the left I think

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Dec 09, 2012 07:32 |  #6112

jack880 wrote in post #15344096 (external link)
Very nice - good light, depth of field and processing. Only slight issue is a bit too much empty space on the left I think

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Terrifying, haha. I like it, its grungy and gives off that horror/haloween feel. But the eyes are too distracting - are those digital eyes? Like the kind that move around because of a projection behind them? They just look too out of focus compared to the rest of the image. Is it a real person? Because it looks so real, but can't possibly be, know what I mean? :lol: great makeup if so. 8/10

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Dec 09, 2012 08:40 |  #6113

Christina.DazzleByDesi​gn wrote in post #15344367 (external link)
Terrifying, haha. I like it, its grungy and gives off that horror/haloween feel. But the eyes are too distracting - are those digital eyes? Like the kind that move around because of a projection behind them? They just look too out of focus compared to the rest of the image. Is it a real person? Because it looks so real, but can't possibly be, know what I mean? :lol: great makeup if so. 8/10

Thanks, I'm flattered you're not sure it's real! It's me (all effects done in photoshop) - here's the original.

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Dec 09, 2012 09:17 as a reply to  @ jack880's post |  #6114

I love the running horse photo. I would give it an 8.5 to 9. I would just like to see a little more in front of the horse (giving him room to run).

Here's one I took of my neighbors last weekend. It was cold and snowy, but a good day for a walk : )

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Dec 09, 2012 09:25 |  #6115

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Here's one I took of my neighbors last weekend. It was cold and snowy, but a good day for a walk : )

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very nice! it makes you feel the "love" in it. also how cold it was, his hand hidden away in his sleeve. although, i feel that you could crop the lower half of the shot. 9/10

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Dec 09, 2012 10:27 |  #6116

just an opinion to people posting HDR..... in PP, watch out for halos...especially edge of trees and buildings.


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Dec 09, 2012 10:40 |  #6117

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very nice! it makes you feel the "love" in it. also how cold it was, his hand hidden away in his sleeve. although, i feel that you could crop the lower half of the shot. 9/10

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I like the composition on the food and how you've laid out the plates, along with the angle you shot. The steak is juicy and looks really tasty, +1 for steak. I do think the white balance seems off with a strong reddish hue throughout the photo. I also think the Fiji water bottle kind of stands out and doesn't fit with the other items. Finally a word of caution, I would have liked to see maybe a Killian's Red or a Stella Artois there, but that doesn't detract from the photo. :mrgreen: 6.5/10

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Dec 09, 2012 11:02 as a reply to  @ ddk632's post |  #6118

I'm pretty new to this whole thing, but I must say this is a really nice shot. 9/10 really like the color of the sky and the tree's silhouette is striking. The only thing I will say is the land itself is a little bland. This was probably intentional though, to set off that great sky! Also, maybe crop out a little bit of the bottom?
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I'm pretty new to this whole thing, but I must say this is a really nice shot. 9/10 really like the color of the sky and the tree's silhouette is striking. The only thing I will say is the land itself is a little bland. This was probably intentional though, to set off that great sky! Also, maybe crop out a little bit of the bottom?
Here is something I've worked on recently.

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The tilt shift effect is really awkward for this photo since it just seems strange that only part of the bench and foreground/background is out of focus.. it just detracts too much imo from the image. I would rather have liked to see thebackground start getting out of focus.

I do like the muted colors and The converging lines and composition are really nice.


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Dec 09, 2012 19:12 |  #6120

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I like the composition on the food and how you've laid out the plates, along with the angle you shot. The steak is juicy and looks really tasty, +1 for steak. I do think the white balance seems off with a strong reddish hue throughout the photo. I also think the Fiji water bottle kind of stands out and doesn't fit with the other items. Finally a word of caution, I would have liked to see maybe a Killian's Red or a Stella Artois there, but that doesn't detract from the photo. :mrgreen: 6.5/10

thanks! these items were used for a set menu promo, so i had no choice lol


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