Way under-exposed? I am sure you are aware of that, was it on purpose? 6/10

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kin2son Goldmember 4,546 posts Likes: 3 Joined May 2011 Location: Sydney, Australia More info | Dec 12, 2012 02:25 | #6136 Permanent banWay under-exposed? I am sure you are aware of that, was it on purpose? 6/10 Bianchi wrote in post #15356359 ![]() 5C7A0780 (C) All Rights Reserved Aqua City - Ocean Park 5D3 Gripped / 17-40L / Σ35 / 40 Pancake / Zeiss 50 MP / Σ85 / 100L Macro / 70-200 f2.8L II IS / 430 EX II / 580 EX II / Canon 2xIII TC / Kenko Ext. Tubes
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BlakeinatorMate Senior Member 438 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2011 Location: Australia More info | Dec 12, 2012 02:48 | #6137 Nice colours, the highlights look a little too blown out but that might just be unavoidable. It looks like a pretty tricky shot to get. 7.5/10 Grasses 16 year old photography and videography enthusiast.
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tmoore323 Goldmember 1,945 posts Likes: 4 Joined Oct 2010 More info | Dec 12, 2012 13:21 | #6138 BlakeinatorMate wrote in post #15356562 Nice colours, the highlights look a little too blown out but that might just be unavoidable. It looks like a pretty tricky shot to get. 7.5/10 ![]() Grasses Lovely shot!, only nits are the weeds growing out of the right side of her head (I'd clone that out), and the prominent weed on the right side of the image as well as on the left. I also would have cropped it so she was a little more off-center and more in the upper left third. Sunset_Gaze
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RishabhSood Senior Member 447 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 More info | Dec 12, 2012 16:04 | #6139 tmoore323 wrote in post #15358206 Lovely shot!, only nits are the weeds growing out of the right side of her head (I'd clone that out), and the prominent weed on the right side of the image as well as on the left. I also would have cropped it so she was a little more off-center and more in the upper left third. 8/10 ![]() Sunset_Gaze The picture is sharp, good DoF but I don't like the crop. 6/10 New Delhi Wedding Photographer
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DigitalSoCal Senior Member 437 posts Joined Jun 2008 Location: Mission Viejo, CA More info | Dec 12, 2012 16:16 | #6140 7/10.. I like the shilouettes of the crowd, but it would be nicer straightened out with a tighter crop Endeavour-0010 --Jonny--
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hyogen Goldmember 2,047 posts Likes: 119 Joined May 2012 Location: Portland, OR More info | Dec 12, 2012 16:21 | #6141 tmoore323 wrote in post #15358206 Lovely shot!, only nits are the weeds growing out of the right side of her head (I'd clone that out), and the prominent weed on the right side of the image as well as on the left. I also would have cropped it so she was a little more off-center and more in the upper left third. 8/10 ![]() Sunset_Gaze I know it's already been rated, but I just wanted to say AWESOME expression on the dog BlakeinatorMate wrote in post #15356562 Nice colours, the highlights look a little too blown out but that might just be unavoidable. It looks like a pretty tricky shot to get. 7.5/10 ![]() Grasses Again, I know it's been rated already, but just wanted to comment - looks like an attractive girl, but her expression isn't very flattering. I'm guessing a different expression--maybe smile--would bump this rating up a little more wow, this shot is glorious.......The shadows, the detail, the exposure...9.5/10...only because I have a feeling the non-black and white version isn't AS spectacular justinleeportland
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hyogen Goldmember 2,047 posts Likes: 119 Joined May 2012 Location: Portland, OR More info | Dec 12, 2012 16:26 | #6142 DigitalSoCal wrote in post #15358925 7/10.. I like the shilouettes of the crowd, but it would be nicer straightened out with a tighter crop ![]() Endeavour-0010 I took too long with my post...haha. I actually like that you didn't use a very shallow DoF here, but the big silver pipe in the bottom left is a little distracting. 8/10 In the spotlight (unintentional spotlight, but I like how it turned out--taken with 8mm fisheye with newly acquired speedlight) justinleeportland
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tmoore323 Goldmember 1,945 posts Likes: 4 Joined Oct 2010 More info | Dec 12, 2012 16:57 | #6143 hyogen wrote in post #15358949 I know it's already been rated, but I just wanted to say AWESOME expression on the dog I think the big plastic collar looks ugly, though. Is it one of those shock collars? ![]() Thanks, and yes it is, not my dog it's my brother in laws, not sure I couldn't do that to a dog... Curious as to what's wrong with the crop, and why it dropped the rating so low, can you expand?
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hyogen Goldmember 2,047 posts Likes: 119 Joined May 2012 Location: Portland, OR More info | Dec 12, 2012 17:25 | #6144 tmoore323 wrote in post #15359081 Thanks, and yes it is, not my dog it's my brother in laws, not sure I couldn't do that to a dog... Curious as to what's wrong with the crop, and why it dropped the rating so low, can you expand? I think people are pretty critical in here...hehe. My thoughts on the crop are that I would have liked to see more space in front of the dog's snout. It's not a 3x5ish proportion, which is fine, but I think the fact that it's more of a square crop, which shows more of the dog's neck and less space in front of the snout makes it 'less desirable'. justinleeportland
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tk1138 Senior Member 294 posts Joined Jun 2011 Location: Denver, CO More info | Dec 12, 2012 23:41 | #6145 hyogen wrote in post #15358963 ![]() In the spotlight (unintentional spotlight, but I like how it turned out--taken with 8mm fisheye with newly acquired speedlight) 7/10 I like the concept, the sharpness and detail are good, but it's too dark (I often have this issue when using flash). The white wire and white wall wall detract a bit and it feels too close to the tree, not close enough to the cat. LW1C0199_BurningMan
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RishabhSood Senior Member 447 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 More info | Dec 13, 2012 09:38 | #6146 tk1138 wrote in post #15360460 7/10 I like the concept, the sharpness and detail are good, but it's too dark (I often have this issue when using flash). The white wire and white wall wall detract a bit and it feels too close to the tree, not close enough to the cat. I'd recommend using some kind of a diffuser, or bouncing if you want to use the flash with a wide (<24mm) lens. If you get a sample pack of gels that has more than just the basic color gels, they usually have some grid-cloth samples you can tape on the front of the speedlight. Also, increase the shutter speed or ISO to let in more ambient light and consider gelling your speedlight. Welcome to creative lighting! ![]() LW1C0199_BurningMan 9/10 Love the composition, the over-exposed area bothers me a little. Love the image overall. New Delhi Wedding Photographer
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BlakeinatorMate Senior Member 438 posts Likes: 1 Joined Feb 2011 Location: Australia More info | Dec 13, 2012 10:18 | #6147 Very nice shot, composition is great. Nothing to critique here, good job. 9/10 Walkway to the End 16 year old photography and videography enthusiast.
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RishabhSood Senior Member 447 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 More info | Dec 13, 2012 12:34 | #6148 BlakeinatorMate wrote in post #15361839 Very nice shot, composition is great. Nothing to critique here, good job. 9/10 ![]() Walkway to the End Thanks a lot I'm glad you liked the picture New Delhi Wedding Photographer
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smaeda Goldmember 1,384 posts Likes: 3271 Joined Aug 2012 Location: Shawnee, KS More info | Dec 13, 2012 12:44 | #6149 7/10 The concept is there but the main focus (flower) feels over exposed. Also a more dynamic angle would have helped. https://instagram.com/shintarodesign
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RishabhSood Senior Member 447 posts Likes: 6 Joined Jan 2012 More info | Dec 13, 2012 15:35 | #6150 smaeda wrote in post #15362441 7/10 The concept is there but the main focus (flower) feels over exposed. Also a more dynamic angle would have helped. ![]() 6/10 doesn't work for me. I don't really like the composition and the frame plus the sides of the car look a lot dark to me. New Delhi Wedding Photographer
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