2/10 "I knew she was trouble the second she walked in the door but I took the case anyway."
This looks like a snapshot of someone who's about to fall backward into the water. Just being honest. I get what you were trying to do with it, but I don't think it worked. It looks really soft, probably due to motion blur from the model but it kills the shot. It's also cropped way too tight- you've cut off some of her hair on top but the hair is what the photo is supposed to capture. A better shot would be when her hair is already over her head NOT in front of her face.