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atsilverstein wrote in post #18076955
As it stands currently, the subject is a bit hard to make out, and the usual colors make it even less obvious. I think this would be nice in a panoramic crop. The planes are lost in the clouds and chopping off some from the top and bottom will highlight them more. Maybe try to get rid of the unpleasant yellow in the bottom clouds. It takes away from the green and red/orange coloring. Overall it's a cool image!

7.5/10

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u captured nice emotion here exposure is nice, colors as well...... overall the excessive head tilt just doesnt work for me along with the position of the shoulder makes it look a bit funny.. the highlight on the hair is nice to bring out the color of the hair but it makes it the focal point for me rather then the face.. 5/10

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JoeyBaccala wrote in post #18075817
Whats up Bart?!! its been a while since I been here bro and I see you been rocking out and killing it! I have not a damn thing to say about this image BUT I FREAKIN LOVE IT!!!
10/10!

Thanks Joey... and its been good just chugging away.... and as always i love seeing your work pop on my flickr, never disappoints

bartc wrote in post #18077034
u captured nice emotion here exposure is nice, colors as well...... overall the excessive head tilt just doesnt work for me along with the position of the shoulder makes it look a bit funny.. the highlight on the hair is nice to bring out the color of the hair but it makes it the focal point for me rather then the face.. 5/10

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Really, really nice. Sky a bit blown on the left and that side of the photo gives an illusion of not being level. I really like your photos. 8/10

Was told to use a pano crop on my previous post by atsilverstein (thanks for the input, btw), and that made me think and edit a photo that I thought wasn't good enough.

What do you guys think?

cubatahavana wrote in post #18077373
Really, really nice. Sky a bit blown on the left and that side of the photo gives an illusion of not being level. I really like your photos. 8/10

Was told to use a pano crop on my previous post by atsilverstein (thanks for the input, btw), and that made me think and edit a photo that I thought wasn't good enough.

What do you guys think?

Good exposure. I like this better than the previous one. I keep looking at the colored smoke because the planes are relatively small in comparison. Maybe it would work as a huge print, but I wish the planes were bigger. (Love to see the jets at airshows!) 8/10

sued5320 wrote in post #18078634
Good exposure. I like this better than the previous one. I keep looking at the colored smoke because the planes are relatively small in comparison. Maybe it would work as a huge print, but I wish the planes were bigger. (Love to see the jets at airshows!) 8/10

def abstract... my eyes are wondering what exactly im supposed to focus on i assume the slot but im left wondering well k so theres a slot... ... exposure it good.. sharpness is there but to me it lacks meaning... 5/10

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ppl must not like me posting cause every time i do its a week before anyone posts after me...lol.....

You have to be joking I love your photographs, beautiful women and stunning cars, I want your job!

bartc wrote in post #18078728
def abstract... my eyes are wondering what exactly im supposed to focus on i assume the slot but im left wondering well k so theres a slot... ... exposure it good.. sharpness is there but to me it lacks meaning... 5/10

IMAGE LINK: https://flic.kr/p/JZWH​97 8J9A3920-Edit by Bart Cepek, on Flickr

Whats not to like about this image.
Clarity and lighting of the vehicle is beautiful, contrasted against the blurred sweeping lines by a well executed slow shutter.
Slight vignette, which adds to the image (but for some may detract).
Score: 10/10

I was going to mark down 1/2 point, due to the fact I can't technically understand how you got such clarity of the vehicle whilst using such as slow shutter (2.5 seconds).
But then I realized YOU shouldn't be marked down due to my own inept understanding.

jimhammer wrote in post #18085242
You have to be joking I love your photographs, beautiful women and stunning cars, I want your job!

Lol... Thanku I appreciate that I was just trying ti get things moving in this thread.....

Butts wrote in post #18085298
I was going to mark down 1/2 point, due to the fact I can't technically understand how you got such clarity of the vehicle whilst using such as slow shutter (2.5 seconds).
But then I realized YOU shouldn't be marked down due to my own inept understanding.

Thanku... amd this was done using a camera rig that mounts on the car... u move the car very slowly during the exposure sometimes as little as one or even less wheel turns.. that enough to achieve the blur effect and allows the car to remain tack sharp during the exposure

bartc wrote in post #18085403
Lol... Thanku I appreciate that I was just trying ti get things moving in this thread.....

Thanku... amd this was done using a camera rig that mounts on the car... u move the car very slowly during the exposure sometimes as little as one or even less wheel turns.. that enough to achieve the blur effect and allows the car to remain tack sharp during the exposure

So the car isn't moving at high speed??

sued5320 wrote in post #18085412
So the car isn't moving at high speed??

No I was pushing it fron the driver door maybe 1/4 of a normal walking speed

Bart, I thought as much but wasn't sure. Many thanks for clarifying, STILL a great shot.

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cubatahavana wrote in post #18077373
What do you guys think?

A much more compelling image than the first one you posted (which was, by the way, pretty cool).

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Tom Reichner wrote in post #18097382
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A much more compelling image than the first one you posted (which was, by the way, pretty cool).

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Many thanks!

Butts wrote in post #18085298
Whats not to like about this image.
Clarity and lighting of the vehicle is beautiful, contrasted against the blurred sweeping lines by a well executed slow shutter.
Slight vignette, which adds to the image (but for some may detract).
Score: 10/10

I was going to mark down 1/2 point, due to the fact I can't technically understand how you got such clarity of the vehicle whilst using such as slow shutter (2.5 seconds).
But then I realized YOU shouldn't be marked down due to my own inept understanding.

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Really nice and cute shot. I would've cropped a bit tighter, but yet, I like the colors of the bokeh. Cool kid! 8/10.

this was one of the last photos of my brother in law's wedding. I really like it and they like it too. It was a polish wedding, so I had about half a bottle of vodka in me. Still came out good. You gotta love flash for freezing the moment.