I"m expecting my first in July, so I'm gearing up for tons of photo ops now
It'll be my first time in OCF, so I bought some wireless triggers & will be getting an umbrella shortly too (I've got a 430ex II). I've been learning alot about newborn pics by viewing other peoples threads lately.
Could I learn from your mistake on the flat lighting & ask where you had the soft box positioned? Judging by the lighting & shadows, I think you had it in front of the baby, but just to it's right? maybe 45* to it's right?
For this image, since the OP got some flat lighting, where would a more optimal location be for the lighting to come from? I would think that turning the power down on the light would help as well?