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Feb 13, 2011 06:51 |  #1

Please, any C&Cs much much appreciated. First time shooting a bride & groom!

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Feb 13, 2011 10:38 |  #2

I really like the feel of these! Keep going!


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Feb 13, 2011 10:59 |  #3

Good shots. I wish the second photo had some catch lights in the eyes. The eyes kind of look dull IMO.


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Apr 13, 2011 15:51 |  #4

did you use flash on the first couple if so was it diffused. very nice pics




  
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Apr 13, 2011 20:30 |  #5

I love #5! The last one kind of looks like she's about to sneeze. Just a thought. :P




  
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Apr 13, 2011 20:32 |  #6

5 is my favorite too....nice work....if these are your first you are on to a great start!


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Apr 13, 2011 22:50 |  #7

These are great! But a little too much contrast for my liking.


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Apr 13, 2011 22:55 |  #8

I would heal brush the spots above her chest on her skin.


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Apr 13, 2011 23:08 |  #9

Agree with above about contrast....blacks are very BLACK - easy fix. Great shots.




  
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Apr 14, 2011 09:15 |  #10

i love them... as cruleworld said the spots above her chest need to go...


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Apr 14, 2011 11:58 |  #11

Second to last one Is by far the Best!




  
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Apr 14, 2011 13:44 |  #12

#1 is magazine worthy, real great shots for your fist attempt. Keep it going.


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Apr 14, 2011 14:27 as a reply to  @ dynamic03's post |  #13

My fav is #1.

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I can only aspire to be this good when my first attempt comes.




  
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Apr 15, 2011 18:54 as a reply to  @ kymira's post |  #14

Thanks very much guys. I think you are correct about the spots, will remove them on PS!
My personal favorite is the first one :)


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Apr 15, 2011 19:54 |  #15

1 is lovely. I wish her eyes were a little brighter though, they are quite dark. I know it's hard to pop dark eyes, but it's do-able. Great Job, congrats on the first wedding shoot, and keep shooting.


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